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I've made some corrections to this version.
I've cropped out the part where the perspective becomes too stretched and I've cut the air conditioner to a better size.
I tilted the character a little bit to see if she looks better than way. I also changed her face and her ears.
I've added a little more hair to blend her with her surroundings.
Is it better?
I've cropped out the part where the perspective becomes too stretched and I've cut the air conditioner to a better size.
I tilted the character a little bit to see if she looks better than way. I also changed her face and her ears.
I've added a little more hair to blend her with her surroundings.
Is it better?
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI can see clearly the picture,. it looks better than the first and it could be better..
first the minor stuffs:
-the top right of the picture before the door you could try to minimize the width of it. it's hard to explain where it's below that bolt sign just to the right.
-door handle but I'm pretty sure you'll fix it when done.
minor stuffs aside,
-right hand of the character after the wrist still looks off.
-hips to legs (or to be direct the butt area) looks very thick.
-hair after the shoulders is too thick and a little stiff
-the cloth covering her chest which is being held by the door
I'm not really sure but I think it should be under the cloth after it.